This was really good. Good setting out of the script and I love the way you have set it out. However, concerned about the 'pill' and how she will kill him. Maybe we could have some dialogue at some point but not majorly needed. Well done it's a good script and I like the ideas
This was really good. Good setting out of the script and I love the way you have set it out.
ReplyDeleteHowever, concerned about the 'pill' and how she will kill him. Maybe we could have some dialogue at some point but not majorly needed.
Well done it's a good script and I like the ideas